Rip my final year project to shreds (recent graduate)

Hey guys,

I've recently graduated with an undergraduate degree in architecture (3 years). I've been applying to jobs in my home city (London) with no success. To be honest, I'm still unsure whether the work I've produced is acceptable enough even to land me a job. I would love for some of you to heavily criticise my work so I can get a better idea of what I'm doing wrong.

For a bit of context, the building is a museum that showcases elements of my university's city history and looks to evoke debate. Many of the objects displayed were hard to convey in a render, however, I gave it a go anyway.

I've attached a few renders. I'd love to get criticism on how I can improve my rendering skills and also where my design is lacking. Of course, my actual portfolio includes all my details, ortho drawings etc.

Thanks!